Author Topic: Anime World Part 3 The Battle Begins  (Read 3496 times)

Colindeng2

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Anime World Part 3 The Battle Begins
« on: January 27, 2014, 05:25:46 pm »
I looked around my surroundings. So, you can really go into the anime world. I realised that the anime I was in was Gundam 00, my favourite anime. Standing next to me was my custom Gundam Astray Blue Frame.
"Huh, my custom. This will be interesting..." I thought to myself.

I turned on the controls and in an instant I was in the air, flying on my gundam. It was a dream come true as I had always wanted to pilot one. Suddenly, the watch start ringing.
"Archie has been killed by a titan in the anime, Attack on Titan. Only 11 remain."
So, it was a good idea not to type in Attack On Titan as the anime I should go.

Suddenly, 3 Union Flags came towards me.
"Halt, unidentified mobile suit. Surrender now or we will use brute force to stop you," said one of the pilots.

Oh no, I only became a gundam pilot now I have to fight?? I detach my sword from my back and as I was about to strike, 3 missiles came by and hit the flags. I looked where the missiles came from and it was from Cherudim Gundam.
"Wait, this gundam was not created in the time period in the anime. Could it be??"

I quickly identified the pilot. I identified him as Snible.


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Re: Anime World Part 3 The Battle Begins
« Reply #1 on: January 27, 2014, 08:44:02 pm »
These stories strike me as the biggest fanfic/crossover story to ever hit this server. I do like the separate anime per story deal, i assume is going on. If you could put some more story to make the cliffhanger worth it, it would work. Anyways, good job with the anime world initiative.<a href="http://dagobah.net/flash/breadfish.swf" target="_blank" class="new_win">http://dagobah.net/flash/breadfish.swf</a>
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Re: Anime World Part 3 The Battle Begins
« Reply #2 on: January 27, 2014, 09:08:33 pm »
These stories strike me as the biggest fanfic/crossover story to ever hit this server. I do like the separate anime per story deal, i assume is going on. If you could put some more story to make the cliffhanger worth it, it would work. Anyways, good job with the anime world initiative.<a href="http://dagobah.net/flash/breadfish.swf" target="_blank" class="new_win">http://dagobah.net/flash/breadfish.swf</a>

Thanks axe :D

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Re: Anime World Part 3 The Battle Begins
« Reply #3 on: January 27, 2014, 09:38:55 pm »
I got your back!!! XD