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Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« on: September 30, 2014, 06:49:27 am »

"Well, I don't know about you guys but I'm sick of Vermillion City," Gray whined as the trio left the city to the north, "We've spent like four chapters here!"


"What I would like to know is why we are leaving in late afternoon rather than staying the night," questioned Yob.


"I have my reasons," replied Tene before continuing in silence.


The trio continued on walking up to Saffron City, which was still in lock down. They trudged all the way back through the underground tunnel and made it to Cerulean City by about 11pm.


"I can't keep my eyes open any longer," moaned Gray," I think I'm going to go blind! Help! Help!"


Tene told Gray to calm down and that there was a Pokemon centre beyond the next route that they could sleep at. On said route there were no trainers as they were all asleep but there were multiple wild Pokemon. Tene exclaimed that this was perfect and started training with her eevee, while Gray and Yob fell asleep on each other. What the trio did not notice was that Team Rocket were playing spotlight near by and heard them.


"I hear the twerps!" exclaimed Python.


"Twerps? That's a bit mean," Sweaty countered.


"Come on Sweaty, we need condescending nicknames for people to show we're better than them."


"Calling them that will let them know it's us whenever they hear it. Our missions will be twice as hard. Good job. Tell me Python, was it really worth it?"


"That's what your parents said about you."


"Found ya! Spotlight!" Yelled Meowth. Tene heard the shout and turned, spotting Team Rocket.


Sweaty slapped Meowth over the back of the head and sent out her ekans, along side Python's koffing.


"Eevee, use tail slap on Yob and Gray, wake them up," Tene called, "then use tackle on Team Rocket's Pokemon."


The thumb was knocked right out of Gray's mouth, who woke up with Yob. Gray decided instead of complaining he'd do something useful for once and sent out his Goldfry to help Eevee. Yob also helped by getting his ivysaur to use razor leaf on Team Rocket's Pokemon.

"Use your elegant petal powers to pump their guts full o' leaves!" Yob commanded.

Both sides threw attacks at each other until Koffing used smog, filling the route with dark gas.


"I'm blind!" Gray screamed.


Tene told him to shut up and tried to get her eevee to land a hit on the opponent but it couldn't see a thing. As the smog cleared, Ekans sent a flurry of poison stings into Eevee, nearly knocking it out.


"Don't worry Eevee!" Tene called," you can do it!"


Just as she said that, Eevee rose to it's feet and a white light began to surround it. It warped in shape until the light disappeared, revealing that Eevee had evolve into an Umbreon. Everyone was in amazement.


"Perfect!" Tene yelled," Umbreon, mess them up with your night shade!"


Umbreon did as commanded and sent Team Rocket blasting off into the air with one attack.


"We're blasting off again!" *ping*.


"Wa wa wee wa," Gray exclaimed," your eevee is no longer useless!"


Tene was going to make a counter mark about Gray but refrained. She was totes happy that her eevee had evolved.


The trio made their way to the Pokemon Centre and stayed there the night. Due to their brief sleep earlier, Gray and Yob were wired all night. They stayed up playing Uno and musical chairs with the sick Pokemon that cheated because they didn't leave their chair. After getting told off by Nrs_joy, the two spent the rest of the night taste testing different medicines from the Pokemon's emergency supplies. Though this night was exciting for all, the following day would prove to be of ever epicer (definitely a word) proportions. #allusion.




This chapter is just a short and shit bridging chapter so sorry if it wasn't very good. If anyone has any ideas to make it funnier I'd actually be open to suggestions.
Also, sorry for yet another hiatus. I might start churning out chapters again like I used to but I'm not sure if I'll get around to it. Basically, I will if Tene will. ;)


Part 16:
http://www.pokemonserver.net/forum/index.php?topic=5194.0
Part 18:
http://www.pokemonserver.net/forum/index.php?topic=5822.0
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #1 on: September 30, 2014, 05:38:50 pm »
Ah, guess I'm obligated to continue.

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2014, 07:32:48 am »
You could maybe youse the correct format of writing. Don't say gray said this and Tene said that and gray said this. Do this 😃.
"I'm sick and tired of this city!" Said gray. "Well you might (don't write this) blah blah!" Answered
Tene.
-who asked you?
-lol
And so on!
Other that that you're a master!
Good luck in your other chapters.
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #3 on: October 02, 2014, 09:17:06 am »
You could maybe youse the correct format of writing. Don't say gray said this and Tene said that and gray said this. Do this 😃.
"I'm sick and tired of this city!" Said gray. "Well you might (don't write this) blah blah!" Answered
Tene.
-who asked you?
-lol
And so on!
Other that that you're a master!
Good luck in your other chapters.

Your example is not the correct format for speech in text. Have you ever read a book?

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #4 on: October 02, 2014, 10:25:07 am »
"Have you ever read a book?" I'm in AP ELA...that's the correct format. When the people are having a one on one conversation. Wow
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #5 on: October 02, 2014, 06:25:02 pm »
"Have you ever read a book?" I'm in AP ELA...that's the correct format. When the people are having a one on one conversation. Wow

That means nothing to me.

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #6 on: October 02, 2014, 06:26:51 pm »
Lol. Guess you can't read or write in a correct format... Wow.
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #7 on: October 02, 2014, 06:27:21 pm »
I didn't want to offend you but it's true.
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #8 on: October 02, 2014, 07:59:41 pm »
Careful, you may be in some extension class but you're still only in middle school. You're intellectually offending Tene, someone who received such a high end of school result that they could have entered the highest ranking university in the country.   
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #9 on: October 02, 2014, 08:34:47 pm »
Lol. Guess you can't read or write in a correct format... Wow.

I read your story, it was absolute crap, spelling and formatting. Theres no correct format to read something. Why do you end sentences with a 'Wow'

I didn't want to offend you but it's true.

You should learn to use the 'modify post' button to stop spamming these forums with double/triple posts.

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #10 on: October 02, 2014, 09:27:51 pm »
Хаха надо на латынь писать.
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #11 on: October 02, 2014, 09:29:07 pm »
Your story is total crap (in Latin)!
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #12 on: October 02, 2014, 10:41:34 pm »
Your story is total crap (in Latin)!
I don't get what I've done to offend you to the extent of writing such an immature remark. All I've done is defended Tene who you've openly insulted.


Also,
Хаха надо на латынь писать.

That is not even Latin. That's Russian for 'Haha need to write into Latin'...
This just goes to show that you're probably making this whole Latin speaking thing up and that you thought you could trick us considering you seem to believe you're infinitely more intelligent. You did a pretty bad job considering Latin is written with the same characters as English, with just a few minor character edits.
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #13 on: October 03, 2014, 01:48:44 am »
Хаха надо на латынь писать.

Why Cyrillic...

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt 17 - Night Time Evolution
« Reply #14 on: October 03, 2014, 08:36:49 am »
Lol. I was testing if your smart.
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