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A story. (can't think of title) (Chapter 1)
« on: January 26, 2014, 05:15:05 pm »
Enjoy.
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Chapter 1:


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W-what the...!
Oh.. it was just a dream (who cares about this into for you haters lol)
I got up and look around. I was in my bedroom, or so I thought I was. Wondering how I got there, I went downstairs. The house looked completely different from my house. No one was there, so I went outside. The neighborhood was different, but there were wolves
outside (yes I am a wolf). Everyone recognized me and I knew them so I didn't really know what was going on. But none of the adults were there. It was just my friends. There was a giant rock on one side of the area and on another side were a few seat-like rocks. All of a sudden, a beautiful howl arose into the air. All of the wolves hushed as a pure white she-wolf leaped onto the giant rock. She barked, "Everyone, you were brought to this area today, for one of the most deadliest events of all in this wolf kingdom." There were a few murmurs followed by another bark, "Listen! This event will prove yourselves. It will prove to EVERYONE that you are the best. No one will screw with you. Ever. This challenge will see if you will be what is called... a REAL wolf! All of the wolves gathered started yipping and barking in excitment. I stayed quiet. "Alright then.. proceed to the assembly den where you will start this. If you fail to complete the challanges... you will be thrown out of the pack. Good luck..." And with that, she let out a howl and sped away as far as the eye could see. I didn't really know what to do so I just followed everyone else. I knew that this would prove to not anyone else, but to myself, that I was a real wolf. Everyone else commented on the competition. Some wolves cowered away. Others ran on. I just followed them and hoped that I could prove that I was one of them...
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Thanks for reading chapter one! (nice comments only please)
-Wolf

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Re: A story. (can't think of title) (Chapter 1)
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2014, 06:18:53 pm »
Um...

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Re: A story. (can't think of title) (Chapter 1)
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2014, 06:20:58 pm »
Um...


What. You didn't like it? THat hurts me.. I love wolfies
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Re: A story. (can't think of title) (Chapter 1)
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2014, 09:03:27 pm »
It makes no sense.

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Re: A story. (can't think of title) (Chapter 1)
« Reply #4 on: January 27, 2014, 08:39:47 am »
Of course...
I'm sorry but if you don't understand a fight of a wolf clan to see who was the strongest, you could at least say what you didn't understand...
-Wolf

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