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Title: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: ZobTheSlayer on August 08, 2013, 05:25:47 am
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Chapter 3
The first mission
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As I nervously went to the desk, I felt lost. Was it going to be terrible or something amazing? The person at the desk looked at me and said " Here is your first mission. What you have to do is get into this Nidoqueen costume and these two Pokeballs. One of them holds a Pokemon which will help you with your mission. The other is to capture one of the Pokemon. There is a herd of Nidoking outside and we need you to get one and bring it back. If you fail, you shall be punished. " I stared at her for a bit. I wanted to ask her to explain it again, but she didn't look like she wanted to...


As I headed outside of the doors of the HQ into New Leaf forest, I found the herd of Nidoking she was talking about. As I gripped the Pokeball with the Pokemon in it, I started to hear voices in my head... I couldn't understand them so I just forgot about it. I let loose the Pokemon to see a Kadabra. I think the Nidoking heard me and they started to flee. I ordered Kadabra to use Disable to try to lock the Nidoking in their place. He only managed to freeze one of them and I managed to barely catch it...


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Chapter 4
The room of the starters
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I brought the Nidoking, Kadabra and the costume back to the desk. The carpet on the floor seems lumpy under my feet. I looked at her expecting her to say something but all she did was say into a speaker " Our new recruit got he Nidoking " I heard a voice of a man saying " A new recruit? I don't remember getting any new recruits. " I shivered hoping he wouldn't figure it out that some weirdo brought me here... I don't even know how I even got here to start with... I miss the field. I miss my home... I miss everything back where I came from.
Luckily, he said " Ah well, just go and let her pick a starter Pokemon. She needs to have one encase of an emergency. " The woman at the desk opened a door and lead me inside. There was loads of Pokeballs. She looked at me and said " Pick anyone you want. But you may only have one " I noticed they were all labeled and had a picture of the Pokemon on the label. I looked and saw Pokemon like Dratini, Treeko, Riolu, Purrlion and Wurmple. I kept on  looking until I saw a picture of a Pokemon called " Eevee " I stared at it for a few seconds. It was really cute. I picked it up and decided I wanted Eevee. It was going to be my Poke-partner.
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: ZobTheSlayer on August 08, 2013, 05:26:15 am
Next two chapters tomorrow if I can be bothered to write more!
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: Sahaquiel_9 on August 08, 2013, 10:38:28 am
I'm starting to like it.  And of course you chose eevee
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: ZobTheSlayer on August 08, 2013, 10:42:28 am
I do love meh Eevee
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: Tenebrae on August 08, 2013, 11:21:11 am
Next two chapters tomorrow if I can be bothered to write more!

Haven't read these yet, but I don't think these really qualify as chapters...
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: ZobTheSlayer on August 08, 2013, 11:39:37 am
Haven't read these yet, but I don't think these really qualify as chapters...
Who cares :D
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: Tenebrae on August 08, 2013, 11:43:48 am
Who cares :D


Me (https://www.pokemonserver.net/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Ftiny.cc%2Fhfwhistle&hash=5cf6a1c6e0b7950c78236cc5e1beab9c)
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: Lucasrx on August 08, 2013, 12:05:01 pm
Chapters can be short.
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: ZobTheSlayer on August 08, 2013, 03:29:29 pm
Chapters can be short.
This is true. I once saw a chapter which was ONE WORD
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: Tenebrae on August 08, 2013, 07:17:49 pm
This is true. I once saw a chapter which was ONE WORD

A whole story isn't comprised of one word chapters -_-
Title: Re: The story of the Evil and life Pt 2
Post by: ZobTheSlayer on August 09, 2013, 01:56:32 am
A whole story isn't comprised of one word chapters -_-
I know that. I meant I was once reading a book and one of the chapters was only one word long