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Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« on: March 30, 2013, 02:18:52 am »

"Gengar use Fury Swipes!"


Gengar sprung forward slashing at the enemy Nidorino. It just sat there as it took the weak attack that it shouldn't even know, yawning, scratching behind its ear.
Suddenly it's trainer yelled out a command. The Nidorino lunged at the Gengar with its signature attack, tackle. The Gengar just moved out the way and Nidorino hit the ground hard, causing it to faint.


***


"Wow! That was the best fight I've ever seen!" Gray exclaimed, switching off the tv and lying back down in bed,"One day I want to be Pokemon master just like them and have Pokemon with strong moves like theirs!"
Right before Gray got comfy in his bed an alarm went off, it was his bedside pidgey clock indicating that in was 12:00.
Gray leaped out of his bed with joy, "I'm now officially 10!!!!," he let out a scream of joy and bounded down the stairs. He slid down under the table/mothers (Miosio) bed.


"Mum, wake up, wake up, it's my birthday! Wooooooooloooaxfffoohooo!"   


"Urrrrrrr Gray, I need sleep. No one cares."


Gray ran around the room chanting and cheering until he tripped over the bin and wacked his head on the stairs. He was out cold.


***


When he opened his eyes it was daylight. His mum was making breakfast with her Mr. Mime.
"Now honey, don't forget to tell Professor 1cec0ld I said hi. Oh and yeah, happy birthday."


Gray came to the realisation that he was now old enough to start his very own Pokemon journey. He bounded out the door without breakfast, luckily he got dressed the night before, shoes and all.
As he ran out the door and towards the lab he crashed into some kid also running, slamming into the floor.


"You gonna die fool!" Gray yelled, grabbing a stick and striking at the kid. He just dodged every hit, not fighting back.


"Why you no fight back?"


"I'm a pacifist. Violence is not the answer," the boy explained," the greatest apologies are implied. I was merely running to the lab as it's my birthday."


"Wait it's your birthday today as well?"


"Yes, my mother says that everyone's birthdays in Pallet town sync eventually, like iPhones and other things. Anyway, my name is Yobnomekop, but you an call me Yob.


"Gray," he replied," I suppose we better get to 1ce's lab. If you want we could journey together for awhile. Like to Viridian."


"Sounds fantabulous!"


The two sprinted all the way to the lab. Running in through the door. Their Pokemon journey was about to begin!




Please tell me if this is good and if I should continue. Also if it's a good length. Thanks to Pythonier for the name Gray :) .
« Last Edit: March 31, 2013, 11:33:24 pm by sharkfin1997 »
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #1 on: March 30, 2013, 02:23:03 am »
Ok You should not continue Reason


Copyright Violation of Gray From my pokemon adventure im taking SharkCo to court See you there -_-


Naaa but of all seriousness good Story keep going



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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #2 on: March 30, 2013, 07:55:24 am »
Points I like about story
1.  Yes the name I suggested was used! (I didn't know Hobo was using it.. Then again I could care less)
2. Well deffiently doesn't follow game physics if Gengar knows Fury Swipes.
3. Everyone's birthdays sync 0.o?  I wish I lived in Pallet Town ><.  That's awesome.

I like it :D

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #3 on: March 30, 2013, 09:10:42 am »
Yobnomekop, I see what you did there.

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #4 on: March 30, 2013, 11:05:30 am »
so are you making a rom or just telling the story line of the indigo plateau?
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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #5 on: March 30, 2013, 02:13:40 pm »
I demand a character named purple to carry on the fantabulousness.

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #6 on: March 31, 2013, 11:38:31 pm »
Points I like about story
1.  Yes the name I suggested was used! (I didn't know Hobo was using it.. Then again I could care less)
2. Well deffiently doesn't follow game physics if Gengar knows Fury Swipes.
3. Everyone's birthdays sync 0.o?  I wish I lived in Pallet Town ><.  That's awesome.

I like it :D

 



@2. Yeah, I was just referring to the fight at the start of the game and anime. I've added a bit to the story to explain it a bit.


Yobnomekop, I see what you did there.
 


He was actually a member on the server and was like my first friend on here.


so are you making a rom or just telling the story line of the indigo plateau?
 


I want to actually go over all 6 generations of Pokemon, if I can :P.


I demand a character named purple to carry on the fantabulousness.
 


It shall come!!

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Re: Pokemon Gray - Chpt. 1 - A fantabulous start.
« Reply #7 on: April 08, 2013, 04:00:26 am »
Is there going to be any bad guys like team rocket?